Wyatt please LISTEN!!!!
Wyatt please LISTEN!!!!
Wyatt needs to decide whether he likes Luci or not!!!! Luci needs to calm down, and Corbin needs to find that way to hot to exsist vampire dude. But you all need to get to the convention!!!!
Wyatt first you need to decide how you feel about Luci. That's obvious!!! Wyatt forgive Luci about the whole lieing tickets thang. Wyatt please listen to me on this one dont, and I mean dont leave Luci's side!!! Luci forgive Wyatt for blowing up earlier and Wyatt should understand!!! Corbin please go and find that way to hot to exsist vampire dude, and you all need to get to that convention A.S.A.P!!! Corbin you also need to find Ceiona and apologize as soon as you find her!!!
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Jul 13, 2009 04:39PM
Okay so this is what I think...
You have good ideas but it's kind of rushed.
And the main focus of this challenge was to focus on Luci and Wyatt... you kind of did a quick fix about the two of them and then moved on to Corbin and Nick.
I usually don't also say anything about spelling, but this has a lot of bad spelling of words in it...so I thought I'd mention it.
Good Luck in the contest however. :]
You have good ideas but it's kind of rushed.
And the main focus of this challenge was to focus on Luci and Wyatt... you kind of did a quick fix about the two of them and then moved on to Corbin and Nick.
I usually don't also say anything about spelling, but this has a lot of bad spelling of words in it...so I thought I'd mention it.
Good Luck in the contest however. :]
Jul 14, 2009 02:39AM
agreed. But as for the ideas, I have seen them to many times. Good luck
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Posted By: vamplovr
Published: Jul 12, 2009
Challenge
Wyatt can't figure out why Luci's acting weird toward him. What should he do?
Summary
Wyatt needs to decide whether he likes Luci or not!!!!
Luci needs to calm down, and Corbin needs to find that way to hot to exsist vampire dude. But you all need to get to the convention!!!!
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obvious, and helpful
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