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Words from the Heart

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Words from the Heart

A script of Corbin's encounter with Siona!



Setting: Behind stage

 (Spotted by Siona's publisher Corbin and Luci are now franticly trying to hide)

Corbin: Quick Luci! In here!

Action: grabs Luci by wrist and pulls here into a room marked with a star

Lucy: Oh god! We're so caught Corbin what are we going to do?

Corbin: We just have to wait in here until the coast is clear, then we'll head outside and try to find Sio-

Corbin is interrupted as Siona enters into her dressing room

There is an awkward pause as Luci and Corbin are frozen in fear and Siona isn't quite sure how to react to the fans in her dressing room

Siona recognizes Corbin

Siona: I know you, you're that girl from the webcast...

Luci: (muttering) We're doomed... We're doomed... We're doomed...

 Suddenly, Corbin's phone receives a text message

Text Message:Dear Corbin,

Listen, when you meet Siona try not to panic.  You just need to look into your heart and you'll find the words to explain why you posted what you did, why she needs to keep writing, and maybe even the journey of getting there. She's sure to understand if you just speak your heart.

From, Toxic Noxen

 Corbin steps forward and looks at Siona, prepared to tell her the entire story...

 

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xxxbeastlytinaxxx
Aug 08, 2009 10:09PM
In terms of writing, I think this is pretty good. But in terms of following the last episode that was placed for this series, I'm not sure it works. Because of the fact that Corbin already confronted Siona. The only thing that really applies is the last part... which is actually pretty good.

But then again maybe everything I just said is just me. It's just my opinion...

Good luck (:
kyouen
Aug 08, 2009 09:49PM
I think though, when they mean screenplay, they probably mean more like Corbin's monologue...because we have no idea how Siona will react to anything.
livie1229
Aug 08, 2009 02:53PM
you couldv jus written the last part thats from you....im sure they wouldv workd it in to the script in a similar matter....
pablocohen411
Aug 07, 2009 11:39AM
Hey, I don't wanna sound mean, but I'd like to remind you that the contest is for you to give a mere IDEA, not a transcript.
toxicnoxen
Aug 07, 2009 04:12PM
They do list giving them a screenplay as an option for an entry, that's all I did.
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Posted By: toxicnoxen
Published: Aug 07, 2009

Challenge

What should Corbin say to Siona McCabre?

Summary

A script of Corbin's encounter with Siona!

Tags

corbin, lucy, siona, words, heart

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