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Tongue- Tied

Corbin talks to Siona



Your word is all you have in life. Now the guy who saw you is on his way and you don't have much time, you need to make it quick. So if I were you I would take my chances and go on stage and make a public apology. Tell her about the journey you have gone through to try and make things right. You have to be confident. Go straight to her and tell her everything. (Don't mention the vampires though. I don't think that's a good idea) Tell her why you posted the e-mail. Maybe she'll understand. What's the worse that could happen. At least you can go on in life knowing that you tried and that you gave it your best.
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kyouen
Aug 08, 2009 10:05PM
Well, I'd have to recommend to not submit in such large letters and to lose the color. Generally, color just kind of hurts my eyes, but the purple isn't bad.

It's really too bad that Corbin has been seen by Siona now, because there are a lot of interesting entries that are now kind of impossible to do.
pablocohen411
Aug 07, 2009 11:33AM
This is a good idea, but remember Corbin already decided she was gonna talk to Siona. But overall, it's not bad.
iistellar
Aug 07, 2009 11:31AM
This is my second submission. I'm kinda new to this.
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Posted By: iistellar
Published: Aug 07, 2009

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What should Corbin say to Siona McCabre?

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Corbin talks to Siona

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