There's more than a book at stake now...

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There's more than a book at stake now...

Be straight with her and tell her about the House of McCabre. She might be able to help Wyatt! But leave out Nick. He's still a mystery, but not a threat.



While you DO want Siona to finish the book, that can't be the only thing on your mind! Even if Siona does finish the book, something is seriously wrong with Wyatt, and Siona may be able to help. Just be straight with her. Tell her about the House of McCabre and what happened there. I'd leave Nick out of it, though. He's still a mystery, but he doesn't seem to be a threat. Why would Nick be so freaked about the book if Siona didn't know something? Whatever she knows might be what you need to save Wyatt, Nick, and yourselves!

 Send Luci in, first. She may be a bit more shy, but her genuine concern for Wyatt should get Siona's attention. If she does have information and knows how to help Wyatt, she'll want to help.

While Luci's going in to talk to Siona, Corbin should sneak back out to find Wyatt so they can show Siona the bite. When she can't find Wyatt, she'll come back in and tell Luci that Wyatt is gone. Now that there's a sense of urgency, the book and the apology can be put on the backburner. The most important thing now is to find Wyatt. Siona probably knows what's happening to him, and if he's in danger, she'll want to hurry and go with Corbin and Luci to rescue Wyatt.

Siona obviously knows some secrets, so it wouldn't be strange for her to be able to guess what's happened to Wyatt, who's taken him, and where he is now. Siona, Corbin and Luci will pile into Siona's car and while Siona's driving, Corbin will introduce herself and start to appologise, but Siona will interrupt her and tell her that she knows who she is, and that right now, Corbin should be focusing on everything she's read, because the world she loves so much is very real and very dangerous, and if she wants to have a chance at saving Wyatt and Nick (though Corbin has said nothing about Nick at this point...), she will have to use everything she's read and apply it to the world around her.

The scene ends as Corbin asks Siona how she knows about Nick, and what kind of trouble he's in.

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xjamiex
Aug 10, 2009 05:06PM
it's cool to think that Siona and Nick might know each other. Most likely they do because why else who he care about what's in the fifth confessions book.
amayxzing
Aug 8, 2009 02:17PM
Its a nice idea, but I think Corbin should apologize first. Because Luci and Corbin don't even know if the bite is what affecting Wyatt. For all they know right now, he could just be acting weird. After they apologize, then they could start worrying about Wyatt. I also don't think Siona should know Wyatt got bitten, I don't really trust her all that much. But thats just my opinion. Very good submission though, 4 stars (:
kyouen
Aug 8, 2009 11:56AM
I really like this. But sadly, Siona has already seen Corbin.
pandamania
Aug 7, 2009 12:55AM
i very much like this! it was very well thought through
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Posted By: dinky
Published: Aug 6, 2009

Challenge

What should Corbin say to Siona McCabre?

Summary

Be straight with her and tell her about the House of McCabre. She might be able to help Wyatt! But leave out Nick. He's still a mystery, but not a threat.

Tags

wyatt, nick, siona, secrets, knowledge