Sorry Forever

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Sorry Forever

corbin realizes that luci was right--she shouldn't have posted the chapters online. she apologizes incessantly to luci.



Corbin should take down her new post of the unpublished Confessions of a High School Vampire Book FIVE, realizing that, as Luci said, they could get in a lot of trouble for posting that online. Corbin should also realize that she was insensitive to Luci's feelings and solely thought about "becoming famous" over any consequences that could have arised if the author of the vampire series found out about the post--consequences that would have been inflicted upon Corbin and Luci. Even though Luci was wholly against the posting of the chapters, the law/court system will probably not believe her because she is the "mysterious Luci" (recently revealed to the world when Corbin faced her webcame at Luci) that vlogs with the conspicuous Corbin and because the post came from her laptop, which is compelling  evidence against her innocence. The law will punish her just the same as they will Corbin, the true culprit.

When Corbin realizes all this and takes down the post, she will go to Luci and tell her what she did. She will begin apologizing to Luci, reiterating, "I'm sorry, I'm sorry..." while Luci simply looks at her, with slight anger/betrayal in her eyes. After a few minutes of saying "I'm sorry," Corbin states, "I'm going to keep saying this until you say something. Or until you forgive me." With hope in her voice, Corbin asks, "Will that be any time soon?"

Luci slightly glares, shrugs, and looks away.

Sensing Luci was really upset with her, she said, "Then I wish I were a vampire so I could tell you how much I'm sorry forever." 

This makes Luci chuckle. Of course Corbin would say something vampire-related.

"So you won't ever post something like the chapters online again?" Luci asks, slightly cheered up.

"Never ever."

They both smile and hug each other, and then sigh contently and simultaneously as they both recall the exciting first through sixth chapters of book five.

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akia
Mar 21, 2009 01:01PM
I thought it was cute ^^
quixoticpixel
Mar 21, 2009 02:32AM
TOOOOOO easy and simple. Saying sorry a bunch of times can get irritating...
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Posted By: r.milo
Published: Mar 20, 2009

Challenge

Tell Corbin how to make peace with Luci.

Summary

corbin realizes that luci was right--she shouldn't have posted the chapters online. she apologizes incessantly to luci.

Tags

vampire, cy, laptop, book, chapter

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