Luci to the Rescue
Luci to the Rescue
Luci attempts to make up with Wyatt and contemplates going after Corbin.
Luci looks around after shutting off the camera. Wyatt is still stomping the ground and kicking up dirt.
Luci: “Wyatt..” she whines.
Wyatt: “Look, just stay away from me vampire girl. I just wanted to go see Vaga-fricken- blond and instead I get bitten by a creepy vampire lady and crash Alberto.”
He looks at the car and falls head first into the drivers window moaning.“Shoot me.” Me mumbles loudly.
Luci rolls her eyes and walks over to him pulling him out of the car.
Luci: “Listen, alright, I’m sorry. I’m really really sorry. We were kind of desperate, and there you were, our only hope. It was all kind of a spur of the moment kind of thing.”
She pauses and points her finger at him, “And you cheated at ping pong, so if you wouldn’t have done that in the first place we wouldn’t be here.”
Wyatt looks at Luci and turns to fall back into the car
Luci: “ Alright Alright,”
She pulls him back up, “I’m really really really sorry. Things didn’t exactly turn out the way I expected, and well, I didn’t expect to… well, actually kind of like you I guess.”
Wyatt looks at her,Wyatt: “Woah, wait, what?”
Luci: “Well you know, I thought you were really aggravating and kinda stupid at first, but I don’t know, you’re a cool guy.”
Wyatt is taken back from the sudden shift in conversation and thinks about what Luci just told him. His attitude seems to change.
Wyatt: “Okay, well, you’re friend Corbin is in the woods somewhere and she could be eaten by vampires any moment, so why don’t we save her now and yell at her later.”
Luci: “I know, but I… I’m scared alright. I just want to go home.”
Wyatt gives her a dumb look and acts like he’s driving a car and crashing it. And throws her another dumb look.
Luci: “Uhh, I know I know. Let’s get this over with.”
She gets her bags and starts searching around for small things that could protect them from vampires (but probably wouldn’t)
Wyatt: "What are you doing?"
Luci: "Protecting ourselves."
she holds up a pen and aks "Do you think this could work as a stake?"
Wyatt looks at her and throws his hands in the air walking away
Wyatt: "We're dead" Luci rolls her eyes and grabs the reluctant Wyatt’s hand and pulls him onto the trail following Corbin.
Comments (1-5 of 5)
thats what they have screenwriters for.
i learned my lesson.
you just need to keep it simple
talk to luci as a friend like in a letter
they already have a main plot they just want your ideas to complete it. So try that next time.
Your other one was really good tho.
(:marlie
and btw, Luci's "I'm Scared" moment is supposed to be kind of slow and a serious moment for her. And of course Wyatt is a mood killer with his sarcasm. I guess the pen thing though was a little too ditsy.
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luci, wyatt, corbin, car, vampire, funny
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