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Lovingly ditch the friends...

Sometimes you have to do what hurts the most, in order to protect the ones you love…or tolerate in Wyatt’s case.

Hey Corbin,

I know it’s scary, but I think you have to go after Siona by yourself. You’ve put Wyatt and Luci through so much, and although they’d never complain…could you honestly live with yourself if anything happened to them?

But you can’t let them know what’s going on. They’ll only talk you out of it. Say you’re giving up. Pretend you’re heading home, and when you stop to rest at a motel or something, sneak out in the middle of the night. I know it will hurt Luci when she wakes up, but isn’t it better that she’s safe?

Leave a note for Luci to find, and hide it in the back of whichever Confessions book Wyatt is currently reading. That way she won't find it, until Wyatt finishes the book, and the both of them are probably already safe at home. In it, explain why you left, why you had to do what you've done; Luci loves you and will undertand...you just have to make sure she's too far away to come back when she does.

Once you’re gone, you have to find Siona. There’s something going on here, and if you ever want to regain some sort of normalcy in your life, you have to get some answers, and she seems like your only way to get them. It’s dangerous, it’s scary, but I believe you can do it!

Good Luck in whatever you choose Corbin!

Love,

Lyra

p.s. And if you do get into trouble, I have a pretty strong feeling Nick will be lurking protectively in the shadows, waiting to save the day…just a hunch, but he seems like the brooding heroic type. Give him a chance.

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So thank's to some inspirational questions... I'd like to add some extra advice for Corbin.

What to do if Luci wakes up while you're sneaking out....

If Luci tries to stop you from leaving, the only way she will let you go, is if you say something that hurts her, and violates the trust of your friendship... it's the only way to make Luci not want to come.

Maybe bring up Luci's deepest darkest secret...something only you know, possibly even say it in front of Wyatt (because of course he was woken up by your fighting)

She might not ever forgive you for saying the things you've said, but you know it's the right thing to do. Even if you have to break ties with Luci, it's worth it, if it means keeping her safe.

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larissabridgette

Jun 15, 2009 08:13PM

Extremely well written and far better than mine.

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lyravellison

Jun 15, 2009 08:19PM

thanks, and I'm sure yours is fabulous as well!

:)

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jacksmannequin11_run

Jun 15, 2009 02:51PM

i love this idea its really good! :)

lyravellison

Jun 15, 2009 03:26PM

thanks!
<3

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ricobot

Jun 15, 2009 11:01AM

Not the most original, but definitely the most detailed version of this idea. I like it a lot, especially having Corbin jeopardize her friendship with Luci to keep her from coming. Good luck!

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lyravellison

Jun 15, 2009 11:05AM

thanks!

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luluh00p

Jun 15, 2009 09:39AM

DONT FORGET THAT IF CORBIN DOES THIS SHE CANT BLOG. cuz if she blogs lucy would try and get clues from the vlogs and come after her:(

lyravellison

Jun 15, 2009 10:13AM

she can still be secretive...plus like I said before, I went for optimal drama, but I don't think Corbin and Luci could really stay apart for long, it would probably be just for one episode, before Luci comes crashing down the door to save the day.....or crashing down the door, to let Nick save the day...lol

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lyravellison

Jun 13, 2009 07:24PM

I was thinking that she'd write a note, telling Luci not to follow her, and explaining why...it'd be hidden in whichever book of Confessions is reading...so that she doesn't find it until Wyatt and Luci are far away on their way home, and safe.

Whether Luci decides to turn around and follow Corbin after that, is her choice.

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lyravellison

Jun 13, 2009 07:40PM

fixed it,

thanks for the inspiration!

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sofie

Jun 13, 2009 06:05PM

aww that wud be a sad episode but i think its a great idea.

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lyravellison

Jun 13, 2009 07:30PM

thanks!

and I know, I tried to go for optimal drama....but I am pretty sure that Corbin and Luci are such good friends, they couldn't stay away for long.

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vamps

Jun 13, 2009 04:53PM

sound really familiar ho yeah everyone else is doing that to! god be more creative and it sound like the one called taking risks!

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lyravellison

Jun 13, 2009 07:42PM

I'm sorry that you feel that way, and am terribly sorry to itschavez for the misconception that I copied off his idea. Although we thought up similar solutions I read through his submission and think that our execution of our ideas are in fact quite different. I wish him the best of luck, and am sorry that this had to be explained.

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lemay

Jun 14, 2009 01:12PM

The viewer is to rate the submission according to originality, creativity, presentation, medium and consideration of the viewer. NOT I WAS BORED BY IT!

1.) Was the submission original and creative, yet maintaining the theme of the original production (i.e. book, recording, film)?
2.) Did it work well using the medium of presentation chosen (script/video)?
3.) Was it presented in good taste and in consideration of individuals reviewing the submission?
4.) Did the submission, in any way, strike a cord of emotion within the individual reviewing it (i.e. laughter, fear, sadness, awe or wonder) in which it was intended to provoke?

Just when I thought my rating system was strict, I find myself struck by yours!

You need to go back and re rate every submission, that you used your current rating system on, and apply the proper rating system.

squeekers

Jun 14, 2009 04:42PM

Vamp, you aren't being very fare are you? Seems that only acter has done well in the challenge (according to you). I have seen many great entries that you have given a very poor rating to.

So yea, what lemey said.

itschavez

Jun 13, 2009 12:11PM

I don't think breaking their friendship is the way to go.
& I've said pretty everything about Corbin going alone. Hm.

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lyravellison

Jun 13, 2009 12:57PM

I'm really sorry, but I swear I haven't read your submission. I shall go do so now, and see if I can further tweak mine to clear any misconceptions up.

:)

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