Keys, Parking Lots, Handcuffs
Keys, Parking Lots, Handcuffs
After knocking Mrs. Fox cold, Rick presents an interesting solution for escape.
INT. MOTEL ROOM. NIGHT.
MRS. FOX lays prostrate on the floor, her legs askew and spilling out into the main room. A moment, then HOPE walks over and gives her mother a tentative kick. BELINDA is watching over her charge. She glimpses out of her periphery; RICK reaching out towards Mrs. Fox. She grabs his hand.
BELINDA
Don't touch her!
RICK
I was going to move her to the radiator. We've got a pair of handcuffs downstairs for the rowdies, and I was going to stop her from—
BELINDA
Don't. Don't move her, don't restrain her, just...leave her be. It'll just make her more angry.
RICK
And I guess we don't want that.
BELINDA
No. No, you don't want that.
Hope has wandered over to the door. She places her hand against it, and then looks back at Belinda.
BELINDA
She's right. We should be running.
RICK
Awesome. I love road trips. Where are we going?
BELINDA
You shouldn't get involved. She'll ask questions, and the less you know the better.
RICK
You're not going to get anywhere on foot. Look, I'll get one of the cars in the lot, and we'll drive out a few miles, and you can run from there. I won't know where you are. No idea. Big old blank up here. Not a single thing that I can—
BELINDA
Okay! Yes, all right. Just...stop that and you can come.
All three of them run DOWNSTAIRS to the parking lot. Belinda glances down the row of cars.
RICK
All right.
BELINDA
So which one is yours?
RICK
I walk to work.
BELINDA
We're going to steal a car?
RICK
It's not stealing if they give you the keys.
From his pocket RICK pulls a ring of car keys.
RICK
We make 'em surrender when they check in. Make sure they don't sneak off.
BELINDA
Only makes sense.
Hope smiles. She's got her eye on something across the way. She points, and Belinda and Rick look over towards her mark: sports car, black finish. Looks fast.
RICK
I think we have our answer. I'll drive.
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like every finalist story has "hope smiles" weirddd
the title sounds very kinky...hahhahaha
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cars, rick, hope, belinda, keys, parking lot, mrs fox, escape, jokes, skipping out on the bill
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