Chen Chen from the Qin Dynasty

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shea.reinke
Oct 27, 2009 10:04PM
Telepathy... now there is a super power that could fit into a super science/magic setting. I don't see a time issue here, but if Stan wants to add a second character into HUNT ... this could be a good deal.
biinksx
Oct 31, 2009 06:45PM
thankyou
i_am_not_sparta_yet
Oct 06, 2009 02:07PM
The picture, looks a little like the one in the link, a little too much. The story, very cute, but doesn't stand out. I keep seeing the essay thing. I think you have a lovely character design, if you tweak the story, and picture you have a good shot at being a winner.
biinksx
Oct 31, 2009 06:46PM
I mean, its not like she alwyas has to stand in that position - lol - its just the only way I can draw people. some people can draw, some can't =p But thank you
lazombo
Sep 08, 2009 10:33PM
Ummmm look familiar http://www.foroswebgratis.com/imagenes_foros/7/3/2/1/6/284928angel%20anime.jpg
Unless you were the original artist of that pic I don't think you can use that character.
maniac086
Sep 08, 2009 10:58PM
oh. wow.
Yeah, afraid your going to have bow this one out of the competition... Tracing/copying another image, even if you alter it slightly like you did here, doesn't qualify anything as "original"...

Just draw up something else and replace the image. You're obviously capable; just put some time and originality into it.
biinksx
Sep 09, 2009 04:28PM
Actually, I've never seen that before but they probably have the same drawing book as I do. I didn't trace anything but the book I have shows you how to draw a person in that stance and thats the only one I'm good at so I did it.
kissdatfisha
Sep 21, 2009 06:38PM
I am sorry but the similarities are waaaaay too similar. Try something else.
shea.reinke
Oct 27, 2009 10:02PM
Hey, not that huge a deal either way. Really - same pose same outfit - sorta - no wings. Whatever.
xxdani-ellexx
Sep 07, 2009 11:13AM
isnt that like.. another picture..? :P but you just drew it? and changed its clothes a bit? xD or i dunno.. but it looks like a picture i've seen :P a lot
biinksx
Sep 07, 2009 03:25PM
Uhmm, yea I just drew it - and no I've never drew anything for this website so you obviously haven't seen it before.

Thanks for your unnecessary and useless comment :)
maniac086
Sep 06, 2009 11:46PM
It'd be really nice if you could get a straight on view of the character, but the drawing looks good.

I like how the story starts. But it seems like you set up for something and then never told us what the something is... Maybe you could at least hint at what might happen after Terry brings her back, just to give the story some weight...
biinksx
Sep 07, 2009 12:00AM
I'm not done. lol Actually - I just put this up while I fixed the picture =)
maniac086
Sep 07, 2009 03:32PM
I think you mean "Jane" toward the end of the story, in the last paragraph...? Instead of Charity.
biinksx
Sep 09, 2009 10:21PM
Yea I did, sorry =)
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Posted By: biinksx
Published: Sep 06, 2009

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Hero, villain, or regular person?

Summary

Terry has a paper on the Qin Dynasty emperor so he travels back in time instead of hitting the books, but he accidently lands in the Emperor's underground mausoleum where he is buried with statues of his army and his rarest treasures. Before fixing his mistake he hears music coming from the main chambers and he finds her. ChenChen explains how she was her masters prized possession b/c she could hear thoughts and she is immortal. Instead of leaving her there buried alive, he takes her back to his time and to help his time travels.

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